Success Story: From "Nice Idea" to "We're In"

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Welcome back to The Winning Edge—your weekly playbook for communication, leadership, and the mindset to win.

Let’s switch it up this week…

Instead of theory, we’re going real-world. Because sometimes, the best motivation isn’t a quote—it’s seeing someone like you actually win using the right tools and tactics.

This issue: a story about a founder who couldn’t get people to listen… until she changed just one thing.
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This Week’s Insights

✅ The $100M Pitch Fix—How one small change turned crickets into conversions
✅ The Rule of Relevance—Why your message might be ignored (and how to fix it fast)
✅ What Changed Everything—A 60-second storytelling switch
✅ AI Tool of the Week—The app she used to prep her most persuasive pitch ever

THE MAIN EVENT
🎤 Success Story: From “Nice Idea” to “We’re In”

Meet Jasmine, a startup founder with a killer product—but a big problem: no one remembered her pitch.

She had the data. She had the product-market fit. But in meeting after meeting, she got polite nods… and silence afterward.

Until she discovered one simple principle:

🎯 “Don’t just explain what it is. Explain what it fixes.”

Here’s what Jasmine changed:

1️⃣ She stopped leading with features 
Instead of listing benefits, she opened with a short, painful problem her audience instantly recognized.

2️⃣ She used the “Problem-Bridge-Solution” format
🧩 Problem – What’s broken
🌉 Bridge – Why it matters now
🚀 Solution – How her idea solves it (clearly, simply, emotionally)

3️⃣ She practiced her new pitch with AI
She used a tool that gave her instant feedback on tone, clarity, and impact (more on that below 👇).

The result? $100M in raised capital over 14 months and a product now used by over 250,000 users.

Big wins start with better words.

QUICK HITTERS: Fast Wins for the Week

💡 Tip of the Week: Ask, “What pain does this solve?” before your next presentation. Lead with that—not the product.

📊 Stat of the Week: 89% of successful pitches lead with a customer problem, not a company solution. (Source: Harvard i-Lab)

🎭 Power Move: Start your next pitch or meeting with a 10-second story. Emotion creates memory. Memory builds action.

📖 Recommended Read: “Made to Stick” by Chip & Dan Heath – A storytelling blueprint that makes your message unforgettable.

WEEKLY DEEP DIVE
The Rule of Relevance: Make Your Message Stick

There’s a reason most presentations don’t land: they’re built for the speaker, not the listener.

Great communicators obsess over relevance. They ask: “Why should this person care—right now?”

Here’s the 3-part formula Jasmine used to rewrite her pitch (and you can use for any meeting, proposal, or conversation):

1️⃣ Speak to the Unspoken Frustration
What are they really worried about? Don’t pitch your idea—solve their invisible problem.

Instead of: “Here’s how it works…”
Try: “You know that moment when everything breaks and you don’t know why?”

2️⃣ Use “You” More Than “We”
Audit your next deck or email. How many sentences start with “we” or your company name? Flip them. Speak to them, not at them.

3️⃣ Layer Your Logic with Emotion
Data is powerful. But what moves people is a feeling of possibility. Paint the picture of what happens after they say yes.

💡 Clarity gets attention. Emotion gets action. Combine both.

AI TIP OF THE WEEK

📌 Tool: Yoodli.ai – The Smart Coach for Smart Speakers

What it does:
✅ Analyzes your pitch or talk in real-time
✅ Gives feedback on tone, pacing, filler words, and audience engagement ✅ Helps you sound more confident, clear, and persuasive

🔗 Try it at yoodli.ai

🧠 Why it matters: Jasmine used this tool to refine her pitch delivery. The software flagged nervous pacing—and helped her slow down and stand out.

WINNING WITH AI: The Future of Sales Proposals and Presentations

AI isn’t just for tech geeks or big corporations—it’s transforming how we sell, present, and communicate. The best sales teams are already using AI to:
✅ Generate compelling, tailored proposals in minutes (not hours).
✅ Turn data into engaging, visual stories that capture attention.
✅ Automate tedious tasks so they can focus on closing deals instead.

This isn’t the future—it’s happening right now.

Get your copy of my ebook here!

ACTION STEPS & COMMUNITY QUESTION

🎯 This week’s challenge: Rewrite your pitch, proposal, or intro using the Problem-Bridge-Solution format.

✅ Keep it short. Lead with their pain. Paint the after.
✅ Try recording yourself—and watch it once with no sound (what does your presence say?).

Then hit reply and tell me: What did you change in your pitch—and what happened?

P.S. Next week’s edition is going to be packed with Productivity Hacks—including a mental model that instantly reduces overwhelm and a daily system used by Navy SEALs and CEOs alike.

Until then, keep building your edge. 💥

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Thanks for reading!

Until next week!

Mary Beth